Seizures In Grocery Stores Do You Think This Is A Winning Essay?

Do you think this is a winning essay? - seizures in grocery stores

(Our local casino is giving away a new car on Sunday. Farmers interested should write an essay of 500 words or less why he deserves to win the car. It took me two hours to write the text, because I'm creative Writing since high school and nearly fatal attack in 17 years ended my skills in creative writing) in the night.

Here's the test. Tell me what you think:
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"Give thanks for unknown blessings
already underway. "
Native American saying

Why a new car is important to us?

Modern vehicles have seen their day. There are about 180,000 miles on our car. It is time for a replacement. I live on the edge, knowing that tomorrow could be the last day of our cars. My husband does not drive because of his disability and need a reliable vehicle to get you places like shopping and medical appointments.

My husband is disabled. He is back on Social Security for people with disabilities to seizures and refractory. It bOperation for 16 rain at Gillette Children's Hospital in Minnesota. The surgery successfully removed the crisis for a few years, but have since returned.

My husband is my life. My husband is very important to me. We have been married for 15 years. We have no children. Our two cats are our "children".

I am the breadwinner. I worked for the same company for 15 years. I drive 70 miles per day a week to work.

A new car is not a luxury, but give us peace of mind knowing that we have a reliable means of transportation.