Which Character sounds prettier? - strawberry kate playground
I am a story, and I see that the character I should use:
Kate tall and slim, strawberry blonde with bright, thick hair. With dark blue eyes, change into a pale blue. Perfect eyebrows and a straight nose. Fair and beautiful skin. An oval face shape that works perfectly with the functionality. Her long legs, she looked perfectly good athletic muscles. The curved shape, but thin, did what every girl. He had full lips pink, broadening the base and then, but perfectly formed.
Or Brooke
Brooke "Tall, slender, with the body of a dancer as the perfect curves in all the right places in perfect proportion. Long silky blonde hair, a perfect face, beautiful, big, long gray bound and icy blue eyes, a dark blue border. A perfectly straight , aristocratic nose and delicate, perfectly pink full lips. porcelain complexion with a golden glow
Saturday, November 7, 2009
Strawberry Kate Playground Which Character Sounds Prettier?
7 comments:
I like the character. Look how often the word "perfect" in their descriptions. These are not descriptions of real people but caricatures.
Give your characters some physical defects that have deficits of their personality. This will be interesting.
To fight only a small tip of a human author.
Kate seems very ... like children? I know that is your character, but not everything about this .... hmmmmm ....
Brooke looks more like a beautiful fairy tale, not angels. It seems to me beautiful.
Tory
Brooke, which sounds like me!
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Both sound very realistic and perfect, but I would vote for Brooke
Brooke. Blondes are perfect too original
both seem kind of original, but I like the eyes of Brooke
Brooke:)
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